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Read and Review (Updated 8/25) Chapter 10

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band nerd	Read and Review (Updated 8/25) Chapter 10	Lead	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/23/2002 2:39 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Edited By: band nerd 05/26/2007 10:25 PM. Edited 1 time.

band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#1	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/23/2002 8:41 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	anyone? . . . .
stacmaster	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#2	[-]
Posts: 93 09/23/2002 9:19 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	awww, that's so sad.... It's a great story though! Thanks for posting it!
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#3	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/24/2002 11:58 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	thanks!
joaquinsgirl	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#4	[-]
Posts: 500 09/25/2002 2:00 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Okay that was so sweet at the beginning, and then it just cuts your throat at the end! dang, shoot! You've got quite a great writing ability! That was just, great. You should very much consider writing something similar into an all out chapter story.
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#5	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/25/2002 9:45 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Thanks! I don't think I could write a chapter story because I would never update. I only write when I feel like it . .and i only feel like writing about . .oh . .i'd say once a year! lol. I wrote that in the summer of 2001, and i've written another part of it this summer. so it's taken me a year. plus, i'm not even finished with the second part! lazy lazy me!
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#6	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/25/2002 10:09 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Edited By: band nerd 05/26/2007 10:26 PM. Edited 1 times.
joyce55	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#7	[-]
Posts: 2173 09/26/2002 12:05 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I love the story! I love her whole thought process, it's funny. I've read stories written in the main character's p.o.v and sometimes they're just dry and lame. You've gotta post more. C'mon now, don't do that to the poor girl. *Quote:* I guess I should be happy for them. I am happy for them . . .really. Bastards. That's me sometimes.
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#8	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/26/2002 2:01 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	lol glad you liked it! sorry chica, but that's all i've got written. maybe i can sit down this weekend and do something. :O)
IslandGirl	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#9	[-]
Posts: 80 09/27/2002 8:42 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I read both parts of your story and it was really good. Well writte with good descriptions of what was going on. It was sad that she didn't get to say how she felt to Justin, but that fact is what made the story more appealing. With cyn agreeing to go as J.C's date made me think that maybe something might happen between them in the future. Alway, congrads on a great story. IslandGirl
angelicpopstress	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#10	[-]
Posts: 703 09/27/2002 2:08 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	^ I agree. I thought that maybe something might happen with Cynthia and JC. And, of course, being the JC woman that I am, I would certainly be interested in reading what happens next. Who am I kidding? With the way you write, this story could be about anyone and I'd still be into it. I understand what it's like to have to get motivated to write. I've had those problems myself. But seriously, you are my new hero. I want to write like you. I'm jealous. -Amory

bbgirl76	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#11	[-]
Posts: 1716 09/27/2002 8:13 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Wow, this is great. I really like your style of writing and the way you capture Cynthia's thoughts and emotions. Her take on things is both funny and direct. Makes for very interesting reading. Hope you get motivated to continue this.
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#12	[-]
Posts: 5729 09/27/2002 10:04 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	sniff you guys are too too kind. Thanks a lot! The feedback made my day! Yippee!
stacmaster	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#13	[-]
Posts: 93 09/29/2002 2:03 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I am so loving this story! You rock! I hope you do write a part 3. I will definitely read it if you do. There are so many parts of the story I love that it is hard to pick out ones to write about. Yay for you! Have an awesome weekend... crosses fingers that there will be more
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#14	[-]
Posts: 5729 10/01/2002 12:21 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I'm glad you're enjoying this story. The feedback is great . .though it does NOTHING for my writer's block. I'm working on it . .slowly but surely!
kwz4angels	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#15	[-]
Posts: 13033 10/01/2002 9:58 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I just read both parts and I think you are very talented. I can't wait for part 3. Do you have a website or are any more of your stories hosted anywhere else? Marie
MystikPixie	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#16	[-]
Posts: 1508 10/01/2002 11:23 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	wow, i love this story. its getting harder and harder to find good things to read so i am very glad to have found this. i hope you update soon.
lances luvsick puppy	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#17	[-]
Posts: 144 10/02/2002 1:03 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	WOW...that's such a sad story, but I love it! Thanks for posting that! I love the way you put your thoughts into the story. The story related to me because I get like that whenever I'm around my crushes...thanks!! I can't wait until there's more!
band nerd	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#18	[-]
Posts: 5729 10/02/2002 1:53 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Edited By: band nerd 05/26/2007 10:26 PM. Edited 1 times.
angelicpopstress	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#19	[-]
Posts: 703 10/02/2002 2:09 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	You're killing me here. You can't leave me hanging like that! I'm seriously amazed at your skills as a writer. I would love to be able to capture a characters emotions like you do. You have an awesome talent and I can't wait to read the next update!
bbgirl76	Re: Read and Review . . . .	#20	[-]
Posts: 1716 10/02/2002 2:33 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	You have no idea what perfect timing you have with this. I had a craptastic night and this new chapter has me smiling again. You had me laughing at so many little things and I love the give and take between Cynthia and JC. I absolutely love the way he had her pegged so well. And I'm really amazed at how well you use her blunt point of view to tell this story. Here's hoping inspiration hits you again and you post more soon.