(Un)Tying the Knot - Updated 10/29
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Posts: 11942 (04/06/2009 12:39 PM) |
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timberlakeluver |
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Posts: 3511 (04/06/2009 2:11 PM) |
   
It's ABOUT TIMEEEEE! I just hope this wasn't apart of Amelia's dastardly plan to steal Justin of all he's worth. |
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IwantJRTinMyBed |
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Posts: 5380 (04/06/2009 3:20 PM) |
I need some water after that chapter my mouth is so dry.
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MrsCrosby |
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Posts: 329 (04/06/2009 4:19 PM) |
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sexylove91 |
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Posts: 192 (04/06/2009 4:34 PM) |
OMG ABOUT FUCKIN TIME!!!! WOW THAT WAS JUST WOW.... 
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laura0985 |
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Posts: 15303 (04/06/2009 5:22 PM) |
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chubbypotato |
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Posts: 1331 (04/06/2009 5:29 PM) |
IwantJRTinMyBed wrote: Ditto. Holy Shit...that's all I gotta say. |
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ItalianHB |
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Posts: 3044 (04/06/2009 6:34 PM) |
I have to agree with everyone else
HOLY HOLY SHIT !!! lets just hope that after this something good happens between charlie and justin - something good as in he moves on with charlie and gets ride of amelia !! looking fwd to more ! |
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YellowHampster |
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Posts: 3296 (04/06/2009 6:36 PM) |
fuck me.
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lovestoned2 |
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Posts: 843 (04/06/2009 6:40 PM) |
*needs to catch breath* Okay FYI, I'm sooo gonna disect the whole chapter! LOL
But it fades slightly as he watches Charlotte tuck her hair behind her ear, her long fingers tangling slightly in the locks before she wiggles them free and he longs to touch her. But every fiber of her being is screaming stay away and he thinks he feels his heart crack. He's ruined everything. My heart was breaking for him. But he is the idiot, all he had to was talk to her. He wishes he wasn't so torn, wishes that Charlotte wasn't so damn perfect, wishes Amelia was the way she used to be. Maybe its the good side of me that thinks that Amelia isnt that bad, deep, deep, deep, deeeeeep down! LOL. But then she does crazy shit and I want to stab her!! "Oh you don't wanna talk about that do you?" I was like "yeah! You tell him Charlie! Tell him how much of a fucking idiot he is!" LOL She has every damn right to be angry. He…he cared about her. A lot. But what did he mean by kissing her. It didn't have a meaning at the time. He'd just done it. It'd been as natural to him as playing his piano, as singing, as breathing. Totally made my heart squezze.(sp?) "And you can pretend that this fucking fiasco is what you want and just let her treat you like a goddamn dog-" "That's enough Charl-" he tries to respond gruffly but she raises her voice over his until she's yelling, unable to stop herself. "-and we'll both keep running on the pretense that you're not about to ruin your fucking life by marrying someone who doesn't even fucking love you." About damn time! Finally!! Finally she said it! We have been waiting for her to say those words to him for months! Yes!!! He pulls back slightly, his tongue snaking out to lick his dry lips as his head starts to clear and the ramifications of what just occurred start to wash over him. What the hell did he just- STOP!! Dont go there! Enjoy the damn moment you idiot! Forget about everything else. Enjoy it! But the thought cuts off as Charlotte whimpers softly, wiggling so that her nose nuzzles his cheek and he can think of nothing else as her lips find his in the darkness. *sigh of relief* Atta girl Charlie, make him forget about everything else. You guys can deal with the consequences later. I'm totally against cheating, but damn that was just hot. OMG OMG OMG. I was so NOT expecting that. I really wasnt. I kept thinking okay, they'll fight, even kiss again, and even when they started ripping at each others clothes I thought okay, Justin will stop it, nooo Charlie will stop it. Well cmon! One of you stop it!! We all know you are both too damn good to actually go through with it!! But I was wrong and I'm sooo totally okay with that! LOL But I also know that things will only get even more complicated from here. Because even though they finally gave in to each other physically, now they have to figure out what they want to do. Or rather Justin has to figure out what to do. Oh Ps. I was so hot and bothered with the hot sex that I forgot about damn Amelia. She's cheating again isnt she? I know she is. I loveeeeeeeeeeeeee you Heather! Hope your having in France!
Edited By: lovestoned2
04/06/2009 6:47 PM.
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YellowHampster |
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Posts: 3297 (04/06/2009 7:37 PM) |
so now I can think a little more coherently and say,
I really love that you are able to show the other side of cheating. Something I am so fascinated with. (as you may have been able to tell from my writing) I don't condone it- especially because my cousin just found out that his girlfriend of 2+ years was cheating on him and hes like so devastated, BUT- I just find it so crazy, that I say then in that situation "this bitch needs to die" but reading this story I'm like "go Justin- who cares about your fiance." I love it. |
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Love Wrapped Around My Finger |
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Posts: 6802 (04/07/2009 4:24 AM) Best FanFic Writer '09
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YAAAAAAAAAY I'm so glad you guys liked it!!!!
I like that the sex was unexpected for most of you! I was pretty sure that by now everyone was waiting for it with every chapter but its good to know that it wasn't the only thing on your minds (surprising for some of you pervs hahaha) lovestoned2 wrote: Can I just say that I LOVE that you do this  (It's Karla right. God I suck with names sorryboutitomg) Most of the times the lines that you pick out are
some of my faves from the section and its nice to revisit them again in a setting where I'm not toiling over edits
I will be responding to reviews on NF but it's gonna take longer than usual because A) you guys are awesome and there's like three pages of them
and B) the wifi is outside here and its windy as fuck and cold as shit right now so I think I'm gonna have to go inside  Goddamn France and it's
weather
But seriously you guys make my day with your kind words and insights into the story. I'm just happy people enjoy reading it as much as I love writing it *bounce* |
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Maysam |
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Posts: 664 (04/07/2009 5:30 AM) |
Okay finished reading da two chapters and have to say FINALLY!!!!! We get what we wanted Justin and Charlotte.
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diamondgirl44 |
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Posts: 1419 (04/07/2009 11:05 AM) |
Holy Hell. That was the hottest. like...THE HOTTEST. There are just no words. All of that tension, and finally, BAM! They just jump on eachother and can't
let go.
Ugh...and I loved how he called her Charlie even when they were doing it. I can't believe all of that just happened. The entire time I was reading I kept thinking, Charlotte is going to wake up from this amazing dream. I also kind of just wanted Amelia to walk in so they could finally end things. What is going to happen now!? EEP! I can't wait to read on!! |
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lovestoned2 |
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Posts: 846 (04/07/2009 4:51 PM) |
Love Wrapped Around My Finger wrote:Aww your welcome! But you deserve it girl! I love commenting. I know how important it is to read your readers insight and reviews. It inspires more! And to be honest I had more but then I realized it would be the whole story! Haha. And ya my name is Karla. |
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chubbypotato |
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Posts: 1332 (04/09/2009 2:04 AM) |
So I've read this update five times since it's been up, and my mouth STILL goes dry.
By the way, I'm supposed to be typing up a paper that's due tomorrow and instead I'm reading this over and over again! Ugh..I'm such a procrastinator. |
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Love Wrapped Around My Finger |
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Posts: 6807 (04/09/2009 4:52 AM) Best FanFic Writer '09
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Awwww WORK ON YOUR PAPER GIRL!!!! Although I'm one to talk. I consistantly write instead of working on my projects. Oh if only fanfic was a viable career
 But REREADS!!! *bounce* I find the sex is usually better the second time around 
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YellowHampster |
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Posts: 3302 (04/09/2009 6:25 AM) |
sooo i'm hoping that that Justin's stupid secretary lady hears them going at it and tells Amelia, or threatens to tell Amelia- so that Justin just
decides to break up with her or something.
however I imagine it wont be that simple because well then the story would have to be over soon and yea, I'm never gonna let that happen. (oh yes, I'm up to 3 comments for this chapter, I wonder what else I'll come up with) OH! Were Justin and Charlie protected? because uh- that could really make things messy! |
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band nerd |
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Posts: 4932 (04/26/2009 8:08 AM) |
i needan update or i'm going to die!! *said in the nicest, most polite way ever.*
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NsyncBabyDoll05 |
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Posts: 129 (04/26/2009 8:12 AM) |
I agree!! I want a long update. Yes I'm greedy, but I can't help it, I love the story!
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