nevermind, grammarbook.com says it's okay!
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Posts: 2507 (07/03/2009 8:17 PM) Grammar Cop '09
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Edited By: rachaelthinksbeesareokay 07/03/2009 8:22 PM.
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Posts: 16998 (07/03/2009 8:24 PM) |
I have to say, it looked ok, but I thought a period would look better.
cool design, though! |
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Posts: 2508 (07/03/2009 8:30 PM) Grammar Cop '09
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Thank you!
We actually went back and forth between whether it should be two separate sentences, or one long sentence like "This used to be a cereal box, but now it's my business card," and we ended up going with the semicolon. Let me take a photo of the finished product! |
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Posts: 2509 (07/03/2009 8:44 PM) Grammar Cop '09
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Posts: 16999 (07/03/2009 8:55 PM) |
I love the trees.
so how do you make those out of cereal boxes? |
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Posts: 2511 (07/03/2009 8:57 PM) Grammar Cop '09
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We just cut the cardboard of the cereal boxes to 3.5" by 2" using a paper cutter, then designed the white part to be 3.25" by 1.75" so
there's 1/4 of an inch border on each side. The next step is to take the PDF file to Office Max and have them print it on recycled adhesive paper, then
stick it to the front.
So basically it's just a piece of a cereal box with a label on the front of it. |
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Posts: 17000 (07/03/2009 9:06 PM) |
that's a neat idea.
and the semicolon is growing on me. With a period, I had a sense of "...and?" In case you were wondering. 
good luck with that. 
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Posts: 2512 (07/03/2009 9:16 PM) Grammar Cop '09
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Thank you!
And I'm glad you like the semicolon. 
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