Okay, I'm done.
Off to read now.
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cinnabon83 |
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YAY UPDATE!!!!!
Okay, I'm done. Off to read now. |
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timberlakeluver |
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Bhaah Southwest.
Justin needs to man up and END this. But I hope there will be lots of seks in LA.
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chubbypotato |
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OMG this was the highlight of my day!
But it was so heartbreaking to read how they both felt afterward. I'm so looking forward for the trip to LA, I cannot wait to see what happens! And damn Justin for shaving his head!
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lovestoned2 |
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Ahhh!!! I swear everytime there is an update it needs to be put on the headlines! Haha. Just a suggestions!
I know I say this all the time but damn, you do such a great job in pulling me in. Making me feel like Charlie as I'm reading. This whole chapter made my heart ache. The guilt they both feel, yet the confusion Justin feels for what he did. Its pretty obvious he is still not ready to admit his true feelings for Charlie, and I think a big part of that is because he is scared. Scared of Amelia? I think so! Ahem, now for my fav qoutes! LOL "She'd let him in and given him a piece of herself she couldn't get back. She felt it now, as she always did after she'd slept with someone, that fierce sense of belonging to him. He had claimed her and she had surrendered so completely, let him take her, all of her...." Gawd, Heather... this was just perfect. It brought tears to my eyes. "Sex with her was enough to make him vomit. Great" No silly girl! Its the guilt. Its taking him a little longer to realize how he feels about you. because it seems that his balls are back in Amelia's jar. Errr. "After you left he apparently went to kick his legs up on his desk, which I have told him numerous times NOT to do, and tipped back too far," she rolls her eyes. "He grabbed onto his calendar to keep from falling but only succeeded in breaking every single one," she pauses for a moment seething, then flicking papers again quickly. "Oh and could you stop by Sharper Image and pick up a new desk lamp for him. He managed to break that too." Tee-hee, I was curious to see what kind of lame excuse he was going to come up with. And damn, they broke the desk lamp too? Haha. Rawr! "He'd stood in there for what seemed like days, scrubbing his skin raw as he let the water scald him but he couldn't cleanse his conscience and he could never take back what he did." You wrote this so good too, so real. Because we might not know him, the real him, but we do know his feelings on cheating and its amazing how well you wrote his guilt. "He'd hung his head when it was finished and then he finally looked up into his own eyes, seeing the man he was, the coward that he was. He'd make this right." Yes, what you did was wrong, and yes you should come clean but you know what makes you the biggest coward? The fact that you should have ended things with Amelia a long time ago. If you would have done that then you would not be in this little triangle, now would you? And does he really think that by buying her gifts it will just go away? I mean really? He should know better. Its happen to him. Be a man and end it. Not for Charlie, but for him! Amelia has made him lose who he once was. Amelia sighs, waving a hand, "Charlotte will go with you." When I read this I yelled, "I knew it!!!" haha. Lame I know, But I did. As soon as Amelia started talking about him going Los Angeles, I knew she was going to make Charlie go. "What is wrong with you?" Amelia asks and now he can feel her behind him, close enough to touch and his stomach rolls. "You and Charlotte are always-" Her voice cuts off and Justin's eyes close, feeling a sense of understanding wash over her. My heart was thumping a hundred miles an hour.. I was OMFG. She figured it out. OMG. OMG. Shit is about to hit the fan! I really do wish she finds out. Karma is a bitch. But I also have a feeling she wont go without a fight. "Yeah…we worked it out." "Last night." Charlotte adds and then feels her cheeks burn, cursing her stupid mouth. She hears Justin gulp as the phone rings. She snatches for it desperately. "Amelia Domineck's office" "Yeah," he breathes out a shaky sigh, trying not to look at her but finds that he has to sneak at least one glance. "Last night." Totally made me giggle. Hell ya, they worked it out...on his desk.... LOL
I cant wait to see how this week long trip to LA goes. I really dont see them having sex again, just because of the guilt, but my gut tells me that he will finally realize his true feelings for Charlie. Alrighty I'm done! LOL PMS Heather! |
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YellowHampster |
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loved this. GOD I loved this.
the way you wrote their guilt- his guilt was just amazing. and I soooo can't wait for LA. zomg. |
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KELBELJRT12 |
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Loved it!
I have on tiny request...please hurry with the next update. Please. I am begging. |
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ItalianHB |
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damn i can't believe theyhave to be in cali together - hmmm wonder whats going to happen when they are there
can't wait for more! |
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band nerd |
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OMG I NEARLY CHOKED ON A TORTILLA CHIP WHEN I SAW THIS WAS UPDATED.!!! OFF TO THE ARCHIVE TO READ IT ( i dunno why i have to read it there)
YAY YAY YAY! |
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Maysam |
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YAY after da day I had...so glad there was an update. Want more Charlotte and Justin
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MrsCrosby |
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eek this update just made my day! but after i always read i want more, and just don't want it to stop! hope you update soon!
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sexylove91 |
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OMG HEATHER THAT WAS FUCKIN FANTASTIC!!! it actually made me feel their pain thatwas just wow!!! I CANT WAIT TIL THEYRE IN LA ITS GONNA BE GOOD!!!
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Love Wrapped Around My Finger |
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Wow thanks so much guys
I'm currently trapped under a pile of homework but don't worry Justin and Charlie are pretty much seated in the forefront
of my mind poking me in the brain and begging me to start the next section.
About the Southwest thing: The little blurb about Justin flying southwest was like a gift from the gods because I wanted Justin and Charlie to fly commercial since the beginning but I kept being like "would he REALLY fly commercial???" and lo and behold, boarding Southwest first class I'm glad you all liked it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! |
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diamondgirl44 |
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That chapter was SO emotional, you had me holding my breath just as Char was.
I don't think I've ever wanted to keep reading to a next chaper more than I have right now. I am SOOOOO flipping anxious about this LA trip...damn! Are they going to work things out between them and talk everything out? Have a huge fight and not speak to each other the entire time? Or maybe just have so much passion flying around, that they HAVE to have each other as much as they can, even though the guilt is weighing on them so heavily?! (I just hope there's lots and lots of desk sex! teehee) |
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IwantJRTinMyBed |
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I need to know what happens!
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Love Wrapped Around My Finger |
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Hey guys!
For those of you who reviewed me on NF I FINALLY got around to responding to all of them. I'm really sorry for the delay and will try and be better about that next time around. School is currently beating my brains in lol. Why did I agree to do this shortened quarter again? Oh yeah it's in France *sigh* Just a few notes for you guys: Dead and Gone (I just realized I don't even know your real name which makes me feel like a douche) has been SUPER awesome and created a livejournal community to discuss UTTK! So go over there and join if you wanna talk all in depth about the story. UTTK LJ Community Also Vikki started this author interview site over at NF and I'm SO PROUD to be chosen as the first author to be interviewed. So please head over there and ask ANY question you want. I'd love to hear from you guys! Unwritten That's it for me for now! I SWEAR I'm trying to work on the update! |
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cinnabon83 |
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Love Wrapped Around My Finger |
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I PROMISE I'm working on it. We're in finals and we have this stupid gallery show we're putting on for the end of the quarter
I have the
thing about half way written and I'm working on it slowly every day but I can only work on it a little at a time *sigh* I'm hoping I'll have some
time this weekend. I have not forgotten about this don't worry!
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diamondgirl44 |
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...sitting, waiting, wishing. (for an update)
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lovestoned2 |
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*hums quietly*
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