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*catches breath* Okay Im only on chapter 10 but I had to reply! How the hell did I skip over this!?? Its brilliant! I love how you show his relationship with the bitch of Amelia. You can tell that at one point they were truly in love, passionatly in love actually. And that he wants to be back in that place with her. But I also feels like by holding on to his relationship with her then he feels like he can hold on to his old self. I have to say it makes me sad that he isnt the Justin that he once was and its to me it just sounds like he is repressing who is once was and what he onced loved-performning and making music for his relationship with Amelia.

But I also love that is so goofy and so easy going and doesnt take everything in life so seriously. And I have to say that Charlie's dad (tee-hee, I know she hates it but still) is alot like Justin... lol

I love how you are gradually showing Charlie and Justin's relationship progress so far. Its just so sweet and innocent from what I read so far. You can see that there is an attraction there. And just so you know I can sooooo see this into a romantic comedy movie! LOL I know Im a dork.

Anyhoo okay Im gonna stop now. LOL Cant wait to continue reading! Love it! You have such amazing talent in making the characters come alive.

AHH!! Okay so Im probably going to be coming in here every few chapters to praise this story! LOL I love love love love love it!!!

Im on chapter 12 to when they go back to Memphis and I get all giddy that Lynn can see Justin and Charlie's relationship is more that just friends! I love how you described the family, perfect. To the T. Its what I imagine. I can just picture myself sitting around the table with them listening to them talk about when Justin was a child.

I hate that Amelia has pushed Justin away from his family and hate that Justin lets her do it. I hate that he doesnt see that him and Amelia are not meant for each other anymore. I hope that I get to find out why things between him and Amelia changed.

And you know I've been thinking about all day( i was at work and all i kept thinking was man i want to be home to read! LOL) and I've come to the conclusion that Amelia does love Justin, but at the same time I feel that her little immature tricks (which they are!) in hiring all these little bimbos is an excuse for herself. Maybe she is looking for a way out?

Thats just my opinion so far lol but then again I'm not all the way caught up....

Okay off I go to continue reading!

And Im back! I just have to reply! LOL Im on chapter 15 part 1....

Damn the chapter when Trace Rach Charlie and Justin were drunk had me rolling! I was so happy to see Charlie loosening up. It was great. It loved how you wrote it. Justin finally opening his eyes and truly seeing Charlie. I love how you show how important Trace is to Justin's life. I love it!

I just read the chapter where he takes her to his old tree house and my heart ached reading the revelation of what Justin once what. I hate that he feels like he has lost that part of him. Which he shouldnt, because music is his everything.

Thank you for writing about how him and Amelia. How they met and how he was fascinated with her when he first saw her. Maybe Amelia isnt a bad person, but if she doesnt change she will lose Justin...

Okay, sorry for that long review (again) LOL Off I go to continue reading!

Ps. I hate HATE that Justin doesnt do what he wants. Amelia wants him on a stupid diet? Fine. She wants him to shave his hair.Fine. But it pisses me off that in some extent she has taken away the one thing that makes Justin who he is. And thats music. I hate it. You do NOT take something that a person loves passionatly away from them. Its not right. I feel like Amelia has somehow taken his spirit that way. I hate it!

Ahh! I cant stop! I cant! This right here:

"I don't want this," he says shaking his head. "It's what she wants. It's always what she wants. Don't think I don't know it, Charlie, I fucking know." He chuckles humorlessly and then sighs, throwing his arms in the air. "When did I stop caring? When did I just start letting her walk all fucking over me? I mean she picks my clothes, my hair, my food. And when she doesn't get her fucking way. She changes fucking everything! She didn't like my party idea, she fucking changed it. She doesn't like my hair long she fucking cuts off all of hers!!! Nothing is the same!" he yells, his hands flailing in front of him and he laughs again, bitter and angry. "What the fuck do I have now?"

Charlotte feels as if her heart is going to beat out of her chest as he looks at her, his eyes ablaze with anger. Anger at himself and at Amelia and at everyone who never told him this was happening. She wants to reach out to him, to touch his face and tell him…tell him something. He looks so lost.

"You have a lot," Charlotte says softly, taking another short step towards him and he laughs.

"What, a big fancy penthouse over a hotel? A fucking white collar job?" he asks, flicking the collar of his dress shirt angrily and just when he thinks his chest can't get any tighter, it constricts even more, stealing his breath. "Where's the music, Charlie?"

It brought tears to my eyes. It did. I swear I felt it. I felt his pain and anger and lost.

This is just amazing. Those whole story is just amazing!